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Post by ♫ admin on Jan 11, 2008 17:57:31 GMT 9
♫ - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - >> For those of you that know nothing about the "puppy attack" plot, don't even apply to play as a beagle until you've read through this thread.
So, now that you've read though it and understand how it's going to work, and that every user is only allowed to play as ONE dog, let the applications begin!
It's three siblings, I've numbered them according to when they'll be abandoned. You get to make them up completley--the only thing is, I'm providing images for their apprearance and giving them genders.
#1 The first beagle pup to be abandoned in the woods. She's found after patrols keep scenting something odd in the territory. Cold and hungry, at the tender age of a moon, she is found by a dusk patrol and taken into the clan where they care for her, but don't expect to keep her.
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#2 This pup was abandoned at the same time as his brother. Another patrol finds them a few days after the first pup was dupmped off, and upon bringing him and his brother to camp, the three are instantly reunited as siblings.
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#3 This pup was abandoned at the same time as his brother. Another patrol finds them a few days after the first pup was dupmped off, and upon bringing him and his brother to camp, the three are instantly reunited as siblings.
Application Form
Please fill out the form below as a response to this thread in order to apply as a pup.
[u]Pup:[/u] #(pup number you want to play as) [u]Name:[/u] (What the name of the pup should be. There's instructions on the naming in the thread which you have read.) [u]Gender:[/u] [u]Personality:[/u] [u]Appearance:[/u]
[u]RP Sample:[/u] (with the pup you're applying for; at least 300 words.)
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Post by Aririkateku on Jan 12, 2008 10:50:20 GMT 9
Pup: #3 Name: Hunter Gender: Male Personality: Adventurous, brave little pup who refuses to listen to orders. Instead of being one to listen and do as she is told, he will run off by himself. Hunter is the kind of 'I don't need your help, I can do it myself!' kind of pup. Appearance: Most of his body is dark brown/black, but some areas, like his face, ears and paws, are light brown. Very large, adorable eyes that make this pup irresistible and too cute not to love.
RP Sample: A small, slightly chubby figure snuffled around the base of a tree. Suddenly it lifted it's head and inhaled deeply. It smelled something, something familiar. The small dog had smelled it near its old home. The pups eyes brightened, his head spinning with the different scents.
The forest was filled with many different scents, some he couldn't identify. The dog lumbered forward, uncaring of what he disturbed. Soon his pace quickened, tongue lolling as he dashed forward. The beagle soon came upon a sweet smelling bush. The hedge had berries scattered over it.
Although it smelled sweet, the dog ignored it. He was intent on finding the source of the familiar scent. Yet again he dashed forward, cannoning through the undergrowth and flattening plants. A metal chain dangled around his neck. On it was a small, metal tag that read "Hunter". The rest of the tags jingled loudly as Hunter barged noisily through the normally peaceful forest.
Soon Hunter came upon a large cave. The unpleasant stench of a bear hit his nose and he recoiled with disgust. Hunter vaguely remembered the smell, but instead of adventuring, he turned tail and fled back into the forest. The pine needles felt spongy under paw, and the only sounds were the scuttling of prey, and his collar. A bird sounded an alarm call in the distance.
The pattering of Hunters paws was only heard because his paws threw up many pawfuls of pine needles. His claws clicked against the icy ground under the layer on needles. An enormous tree loomed up in the distance, its branches sagging, touching the ground. Hunter skidded to a halt, his eyes widening at the sight of the giant tree. The surprise in his eyes changed to excitement as he shot off toward the tree.
As he came upon the tree, the scent he was tracking got stronger. Cats! A flurry of barking exploded from his muzzle and Hunter raced under the tree, startling the many cats padding under the tree branches. Shocked by the amount of cats in the clearing, the dog sat down, and fell asleep, thinking over the days events.
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Post by poppy on Jan 13, 2008 11:19:54 GMT 9
Pup:#1
Name:Daisy
Gender:female
Personality:She's a VERYhyper dog.She's has cute has a button and is very loving.
Apperence:Daisy has white,tan,and black all over her body.
RP Sample:A small figue loomed in the distance.On the collor read "Daisy".Daisy walked through the peaceful forest.She didn't want to disturb it's silents.How she missed her brother Hunter.Daisy padded along and foynd a cave.She sniffed then made a funny face. "eeeeewwww."She barked.Then she turned tail and ran.
"I am a dog.if i meet A cat i'll chace it of but if it's a bunch of cats,i'll be the one running."She barked silently. She walked along way that seemed like going in circles.She followed a sent and found out that it was the sent of cat.Daisy followed it and saw a cat with brown and black fur.Daisy accadently mistoke it for her brother and charged.
Daisy stopped and saw 1,2,3,4,5 cats!She ran and ran until she got to her make sift home.She settled down to rest and went to sleep..........Daisy woke up with a jolt.sSomething as poking her.She turned her head and saw some cats. "why are you here?"she asked. "hhhmmm?"the cat said. Daisy let out a sigh and then went back to sleep and the cat padded away.
Daisy awoke from a Gentle sleep.She sood up and yawned.then walked up a hill toward a tree.She heard a rustle and then, "gotta"Daisy barked. She had cuaght a sparrow and ate it in like three bites. "uuummmm....."She Barked silently. "i think i'll go for a walk."Daisy howled silently so no cat could hear.
Daisy walked in a big circle for 2 hours then returned to her home.Daisy let out a big yawn and went to sleep.Them the next morning she woke up to find a patrol of cats. "back off."Daisy barked bravely.
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Post by ♫ admin on Jan 13, 2008 11:51:27 GMT 9
♫ - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - >> Clearly, Poppy, that sample is not even close to 300 words. Also, I asked for apprearance to see how you would describe the picture in your own words.
EDIT Yes, that is 300 words.
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Post by poppy on Jan 13, 2008 22:30:01 GMT 9
so is it like approved and is the other one approved?
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Post by Aririkateku on Jan 14, 2008 6:52:58 GMT 9
Um, Poppy? Not to be rude or anything but, it seems you copied some of my RP sample. I had the collar thing, with Hunter's name on it, and the cave thing.
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Post by sox on Jan 14, 2008 8:18:18 GMT 9
Pup: #2 Name: Growl Gender: Male. Personality: He's a playful pup who always is seen joking around and playing with the kits and apprentices. He has alot of energy for a dog, and his free spirited like a bird. He is rather brave and won't stop at anything to protect whoever is in trouble, and will not hesitate to kill whoever is hurting his cherished ones. That is clearly shown by how he acts. He is a respectful pup who likes to help out with errands.. sometimes. When he's not in his frequent rebellious stage. He usually does whatever he pleases, which may or may not annoy others.
Appearance: Quite large for a pup, definately the first born out of his litter. With a base of pure white, about 70 percent of his body is black and brown. On his back to his tail s the dominating black with some muddied brown splotches here and there, but on the top of his head e has a dark brown hue that colors his floopy ears. Light brown fur completely makes some of the spot around his eyes and on his forelegs. On the tip of his tail, is white.
RP Sample:
Yes, there it was! The flash of orange and black flickered through the bushes, darting away from it's pursuer in an unbelievable speed. The fox ran silent and swift, weaving through the trees with it's ears pinned to it's head. It looked back behind it at it's pursuer, and threw a sharp snarl at it.
However, the big pup did not seem unnerved. Instead, it barked loudly, causing all the prey around them to jump. Salmon hued tounge lolled out his slightly parted jowls as he panted, his legs guiding him after the fox, his tiny paws missing the rocks and twigs and anything else that would injure them. His tail waved like a flag behind him, though something attached to it would make anyone want to claw their ears off. Yes, a small crimson ribbon with a pair of jingle bells securely attached to it. They jingled and jingled like the jingle you hear when Santa's coming.
The scent of the forest, the adrenaline of the chase! He loved it so. A grin spread on his face, not knowing the fox took a sharp turn and dissapeared within the bushes. At the last minute he found out, only to be tackled by a group of five cats. Yes, the icky felines he used to chase back home. He let a string of barks and snarls rip from his muzzle, and the cats got off quickly, shocked and startled. However, once he got up he ran away, forgetting that it was his jingling and scent that allowed the cats to follow him.
A dead end! He faced a rock wall of a boulder in a clearing that was bordered by a line of dense forest. He wouldn't get away in time. His multi-colored body spun around to face his enemy. His nose wrinkled and he recoiled as the cats neared him. Ugh, did they stink! And they lived in the forest, the forest smelled nice even if he didn't recognize anything. Ears perked, he listened to their words. Clan, dog, enemy, kill, keep.. What were they saying? He tilted his head in confusion, his small puppy teeth bared with his tail lashing behind him. The cats were about a little smaller than him, though they were probably skilled and trained in fighting. However.. he stood his ground and demanded fiercly, "Who are you?"
His regular understandable language unlike most dogs to the cats had surprised them. They stood rigid and alarmed, eyes wide.
Word count; Around 400. xD
I hope I'm not too new for this. 0.0
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Post by Fishy on Jan 14, 2008 10:00:37 GMT 9
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Pup: Numero uno if I may. Name: Luna, twoleg name; Littlebark, Clan name Gender: Female Personality: Luna is a very kind pup. She loves all creatures even if they hurt her. She is one of those fast learners, so when she was with twolegs she already learned 'sit and stay'. She is very calm and doesn't chase after most animals. She is quite timid and is afraid of twolegs since they abandoned her. Appearance: Luna has very pale fur. her base coat is white with light brown on her face and ears. Her ears are long and floppy, with a few black hairs on them. Her back is fully black and her tail runs from a light brown at the tip to white to black on her back. Her eyes are big and brown but they look black. Her legs are white and so are her paws and claws. As her Clan name states, she can't really bark. When she does bark, it is very faint.
RP Sample: A twoleg 'monster' drives up and stops on the forest floor. One of it's four mouths opens and a twoleg walks out of it, carrying a squirming scrap of fur by it's scruff. the bundle yelps in pain and lets out faint barks. "Sorry, but we don't need you." The twoleg mumbles in it's ear. A female twoleg comes and wraps the fur in a dirty old blanket. "You still have to be gentle." the twoleg whispered as the other twoleg got back into the 'monster'. She carries the now quite bundle over to the bottom of a tree and lays it softly on the ground. She walks away without looking back.
A few hours had passed and the small animal finally whimpered in loneliness. Her big eyes opened and looked up at the dark, starry sky. She gazed up, before scrambling out of the blanket. her nose sniffed the air as she shrunk down at the ground. "What's my name?" she mumbled slowly. 'Luna, sit!', "Oh yeah, it's Luna! And where are my two brothers?" she gazed around and looked down at her paws. Standing up she sniffed the air. It was so dark and lonely for her. Her ears perked up slightly. She padded forward a bit, before shrinking back. was she really about to go into all that darkness? Her tail wagged behind her and she jumped forward, as if she were a cat springing on prey. "Something smells funny!" she mumbled and padded slowly through the darkness. Her tail stuck between her skinny legs. Her fur prickled with excitement.
"Where am I? Where are my pets?" she was referring to what cats called twolegs. She pushed her way through a bush and her stomach lurched. Last thing that she remembered was dangling in the air by her scruff and than being wrapped in a blanket and being settled on the dirt floor. She scented a few pine trees, "Those were in my backyard!" she yelped in slight excitement. Her paws crushed the thin pine needles beneath her and her tail swept the ones away behind her. A certain smell reached her nose. "Sassy!" She barked as loud as she could. Sassy was the cat that lived in the house where Luna once lived. She raced through bushes and ducked under low branches.
Her small paws soon gave out and she stopped in her tracks, panting for breath. Her tail wagged at what looked 100 Miles Per Hour. She needed a rest. She spun around once and settled down on a clump of pine needles. She heaved a large sigh and glanced up at the sky, 'Maybe when I wake up Sassy will be right there waiting for me, or maybe one of her cat cousins!' she thought slowly before closing her eyes and drifting into a slow sleep. Her flank moved slightly with her breaths and her paw twitched slightly. What would be waiting for her in the near future? { Unless we can make our own dogs, I am going to make her. So cute!}
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Post by ♫ admin on Jan 14, 2008 11:46:18 GMT 9
Poppy, I have not approved any applications yet. Please be patient. And I sort of agree with Nightshade--about the collar and cave. You know. It's sort of similar.
Anyways, I'm seeing some great apps so far, and I hope you've all read the thread I linked to and understand how the plot is going to work! ^w^ Otherwise, if you get the part and don't know what the heck is going on at all, I'm gonna be mad.
So, yes. I'm going to give the apps until the 16th so that everyone has a chance to reply. On the 16th (my time, in Korea, which is a little ahead) I'll pick who plays each dog :3
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Post by ♫ admin on Jan 16, 2008 14:08:03 GMT 9
Alrighty, it's decided. I saw fantastic apps, and thanks everyone for trying out ^w^ There was only one overlap (for pup #1) and the apps were great, I enjoyed reading them! :3
Pup 1 FISHEY!
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Pup 2 SOX!
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Pup 3 NIGHTSHADE!
Thanks to everyone for trying out. If you didn't make it (or didn't apply) just look out--very soon applications for some bigger city dogs will open!
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A NOTE TO THE WINNERS:
Fishy, you can go ahead and post as Luna/Littlebark in the territory board (being dumped off, confused, whatever.) Once she's found and brought back to camp by the patrol, Sox and Nightshade can go ahead and post as their dogs at the same (more or less) time. They'll then be found by a patrol and brought back to camp as well.
Make sure you know what's going on in the plot! ^w^ Not saying you'd deliberatley ignore instructions or anything, just giving you a reminder! ^w^ If there's anything unanswered or not made very clear by the board, feel free to PM me about it, but I think we've prettymuch got it all planned out :3
-ZAM!
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Post by Fishy on Jan 17, 2008 6:15:52 GMT 9
Yippy! I kinda thought I was gonna win, but you did good too Poppy. ^^ Maybe you could try out for one of the city dogs? Sorry if me getting puppy #1 makes you feel bad. Sorry! And thanks Boe/Zam.
By the way, what do you like to be called more? Boe or Zam?
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Post by sox on Jan 17, 2008 10:08:42 GMT 9
Whoooooo! XDD -dances.- Oh yeah, go beagles, go beagles. xD
:3 Okay then. I will prepare my post and wait until Fishey and/or Nightshade posts. <.<
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Post by Fishy on Jan 19, 2008 6:26:41 GMT 9
Great avatar by the way Zam. It kinda scares me though. I will just use part of my RP sample as the post, since it was going to be her first post.
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Post by .}{EXXI. on Jan 21, 2008 2:46:02 GMT 9
Cool, congrats, guys!
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Post by Aririkateku on Mar 9, 2008 0:51:50 GMT 9
Alright, I have a question. Being the adoption board moderator, should I put Growl up for adoption?
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