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Post by ♫ admin on Jan 24, 2008 17:25:22 GMT 9
We've been discussing it on the staff board, and all the arrangements have been made:
Users who this plot especially concerns (though everyone has to read it, 'cause it's pretty big)
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-Folf -ZAM -Wolf -Shadow _______________________________________
A patrol is walking through the PineClan forest, checking for more dogs, when they find something horrifying.
Ebonystar's body. Laying in a pool of his own blood that seemingly comes from no where but the corner of his crimson, dripping mouth. His eyes are glazed. His body cold and hard. The life has been sucked out of him.
The patrol could swear that for a split second, they see a StarClan warrior draw his fangs from Ebonystar's neck, glaring down at the lifeless body, but in a split second, the warrior is gone, leaving Ebonystar with no marks of ambush or foreign scent.
When he's brought back to camp, Jaycall steps up for the burden of leadership out of inexplainable impulse--but in an instant, Dustwater bursts into camp from another one of her "hunting trips" explaining that she can lead the clan better, and is a more senior and experienced warrior. In the end, PineClan sides with the queen Dustwater, and in an instant, everything starts to go wrong.
When Dustwater goes to the mossy cave, StarClan does not receive her or give her a dream--she fakes it and comes out, pretending to have been given nine lives and commanding all the cats to call her Duststar when really, there was no dream at all.
She recruits rogue bodyguards and shares the leadership with her rogue friend, Swallow. Suddenly, the PineClan camp is flooded with the rogues of TalonClan, the city dogs that Swallow recruited, and the cats of Ocean Sea at every hour of the day.
They are plotting an ambush on the SandClan camp, but a SnowClan apprentice (Pheonixpaw, if that's okay with Shadow :3) trespasses on PineClan territory, accidentally going deeper than she meant to when chasing a rabbit, overhears this and reports back to Moonstar, who proceeds to gather together JaggedClan and SandClan to prepare themselves for the attack.
Swallow and Duststar are planning to take over the whole territory of the clans, splitting it between themselves. They're starting with SandClan (only because that's the territory the unsuspecting Ocean Sea wants to attack)
Duststar makes daughter Agamakit deputy in an attempt to corrupt her. Needlegaze is unhappy with how she's running the camp but still loves her--little does he know, Duststar's got a secret affair with Harley.
A few days later, Duststar, by Swallow's side, leads PineClan, TalonClan, and Ocean Sea in an attack on what they thought would be an unsuspecting SandClan--but JaggedClan and SnowClan are waiting with them near the border, and full battle breaks out on Pine-Sand terra.
(not sure who'll come out victorious yet)
Several PineClan cats die (here's where we need YOU to volunteer xD; including Needlegaze. Cats from both sides bear heavy wounds and numerous deaths.
Agamakit's not becoming evil enough.
Eventually, the city dogs kill Swallow because they decide they've had enough of being overwhelmed and outnumbered by cats--they feel they've been tricked by Swallow and hate her.
Once Swallow dies, the rogues disperse. Ocean Sea, also feeling tricked, leaves. They find a cove facing the ocean in JaggedClan's cliff face to settle in.
That leaves a very unhappy PineClan and a very corrupt ruler. Duststar is pregnant with Harley's kits. She needs to leave the clan--she has no reason or desire to stay, but tries to hang on to power anyways (she's still got a few rogue bodyguards who've stayed in camp) but it does no good.
Suddenly Wolfpaw (if Wolf says it's okay, and who may or may not be a warrior by then) begins getting messages from StarClan, including lots of dreams about Jays. One day, he sees a whole flock of Jays in the PineClan leader's nest, calling loudly, and announces the prophecies he's been getting to the clan--they basically mean that Jaycall is supposed to be the leader.
PineClan, sure that Jaycall is supposed to be leader, revolts. Duststar turns coward, and, violently attacking Agamakit (Now Agamapaw, mentored by her mother who's been mean to her daughter the whole time) spitting in her face, and calling her a coward, leaves and takes the simple name of Dust as a rogue.
She gives birth to Harley's kits, once again, in SnowClan territory, and there'll be a whole thing about her, Harley, and her kits where Pepperthorn gets involved, but that's besides the point.
The point is, after Jaycall becomes leader, she goes to get her nine lives--and finds out the truth:
Ebonystar was never supposed to be the leader.
On the leader before Ebonystar's deathbed, he told his deputy, Ebonytree, that Jaycall was to become leader, that he had received a sign from StarClan that said if she did not now, great devastation would fall upon PineClan in the future. In Ebonytree's quest for power, he agreed, walked out, and...ignored his leader's wishes, making himself the PineClan leader.
His dream that was supposed to be from StarClan was picked up by his mother, Turtle, of the Dark Clouds, who gave him ten lives.
So, StarClan came and killed Ebonystar in the forest. And the prophecy that had haunted the past PineClan leader so many moons ago was fulfilled.
(References to the plot about the alternate leader can be seen in the original app for Ebonystar--we'd always been planning some sort of revolt against him but after Osaka left...)
ANYTHING WITH A STRIKETHROUGH IN IT HAS BEEN DONE ALREADY
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Post by ♫ admin on Jan 24, 2008 17:42:37 GMT 9
I'm willing to give up:
-Fish -Needlegaze
In the battle with Ocean Sea (I don't have any rogue cats who aren't on the boat and I only have 3 OS cats Dx Sorry! Also my PineClan cats are also only 3, and I'm plotting for Agamakit and Dustwater)
On the good side (Jagged, Snow, and Sand) the following will loose their lives:
-Wildstar (loose one life--she already lost 2 by default so that'll bring her down to 6 left) -Oakwood
(Again--Seaturtle is my only Sand, Raindance can't die yet, and Bonecry, Pepperthorn, and Xyriscalyx are being plotted >3 And you don't honestly expect me to get rid of brand new, fluffy, mute Driftingkit, can you?? -nuzzles-)
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Post by Fishy on Jan 24, 2008 21:22:23 GMT 9
Oh, this sounds interesting! I can't wait for it to happen!!
I am willing to give up:
PineClan: Nobody, 'cause I only have Hollowkit at this time. Whom will probably be Hollowpaw soon.
SandClan: Pebblepaw could be badly injured, Hailfrost has his own mini-plot going on...
JaggedClan: Grrr...so many JaggedClan cats...Nightpaw, I am willing to give up Nightpaw, and Riverstone could be severely hurt.
SnowClan: Got nobody in here...
Rogues: Harley already has his thing with Dustwater, so no. Skylar...if he becomes part of TalonClan, than I guess he can die.
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Post by .}{EXXI. on Jan 25, 2008 1:15:33 GMT 9
Very nicely put, Zam. Can't wait to start everything up!
I am willing to loose...
(good & bad)
Stormcloud [[death planned]] Moon [[Void was supposed to take part, but I guess Pepperthorn can still kill her]] Swallow [[death planned]]] Lightning [[one life, killer open]]
And the notable injuries are...
Ghoststorm [[half his tail torn off]]
Oh, that's it. Adderpaw and Bubble will be scratched up quite a bit too. The only other cat I have who will be involved is Skyfeather but I don't want her to die yet.
So, I'll be off to the Personals board, I guess. And now I can post my undeveloped mini-plot with Swallow. Wooo! ;D
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Post by Incognito on Jan 25, 2008 3:13:28 GMT 9
Coolio!
Cats to give up-- Ashpaw -- Shall die. Sun of Pale Light -- Shall die.
Topazpaw -- Severely injured. (Large, mangled gash in side.) Topazpaw: o.o Help meh.
So... yah! Any volunteers on the death and destruction? (Or should I ask on the personals board?)
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Post by Folf on Jan 25, 2008 8:30:26 GMT 9
Squee, thank you so much again Boe, for giving Jaycall and me the opportunity! ;D But now, to the cat fodder section...
To StarClan, with You!
PineClan- Runningspirit. Since it'll effect Jaycall a heck of a lot. A bit of a twist and such. And it's not like I can kill Jaycall. XD And Duskpaw is cute and young and all.
JaggedClan- Falconpaw. I've been pulling a blank on him for too long. Maybe he can see Oakwood die, freeze and gape, and then have his throat slashed. They could die next to each other...how sweet...
SandClan- No way am I killing Marblepaw, and Racconpaw has a future, and I WILL make a mini plot for him. x3 I'll make Marblepaw do some heroic thing, like guarding kits and apprentices, or the Medicine Den.
SnowClan- If the ban comes off in time for Stonerib to get involved, he still won't be killed. I love him, and he's my only SnowClan kitty.
And anyone can kill Falconpaw and Runningspirit. Falcon will be standing still, completely inattentive. And I'll make Runningspirit engage in combat, and nicely ask the person to kill him. x3
To the Medicine Den, with You!
Veiledeyes- A really bad broken leg. Really bad. like the bone is completely in two and it's sticking out and...yeah. Plus the usual scratches.
Duskpaw- Her stomach will be split open. No organ damage, and it'll just be about half an inch wide (the cut)...but it'll get infected and all that.
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Post by .}{EXXI. on Jan 26, 2008 2:23:37 GMT 9
Well, Lightning needs to kill someone, to prove he's not completely worthless (not an apprentice, please) and Swallow is menat to be bloodthirsty and all that so she could go on a rampage of some sort and heavily injure/kil some cats. She's evil enough to murder/maim apprentices too. If Lightning were to kill Runningspirit then PineClan would kind of hate OS a lot which might make for interesting future twists. And Bubble wouldn't mind being involved in a tussle with Topazpaw in which she magles and gets mangled. Or Stormy could kill Sun to do something useful before he dies via a million apprentices. Or Ghoststorm.
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Post by Folf on Jan 26, 2008 7:55:47 GMT 9
Oi! Thanks Hexxi, for offering up Lightning as a killer. I doubt I can say the same from Runningspirit, through...
And perhaps a rouge could do the damage to Duskpaw? I can really only imagine an evil cat splitting someones stomach...Mr/Mrs. Crush-Veiled's-Bones can be anyone.
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Post by Incognito on Jan 28, 2008 4:58:21 GMT 9
Thanks, Hexxi! Ok, so... Topazpaw mangled up by Bubble... Sun killed by Stormcloud. (Kill him whenever you like, early or later in.) So Topazpaw will injure Bubble badly... (In a broken bone way or a load of scratches, gouges, etc?) That leaves Ashpaw to be killed... any volounteers? Felicia get Duskpaw? She be a rouge, well, she used to, she joined OS/TalonClan... does that still count? Then again, Dark could do it, he's pretty merciless and all...
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Post by Folf on Jan 28, 2008 9:47:20 GMT 9
Felicia and Dark both sound fine, Sapphire. :3 Dankes!
And Falconpaw, he's the one of my cats that'll kill someone. x3 Boe, maybe he could lead Fish (or Needlegaze) to his demise?
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Post by ♫ admin on Jan 29, 2008 19:48:56 GMT 9
|| ♫- there's only music so that there's new ringtones... ''I forgot about injuries! xD Ohkies...I had this all planned out but I can't remember exactly what I've said... =skitters off to check StarClan plot boards=
OHKIES.
Apparently Swallow is going to gouge out one of Raindance's eyes and rip her ear in half. And Raindance's remaining eye is gonna go colorblind...
Swallow is also apparently going to kill Needlegaze.
And...Osaka's OS cats were GOING to take Wildstar's life, but she's gone now... ;o; So, any takers?
Folf, the Falconpaw killing Fish thing sounds cool! I like it! :3
And...I've decided that Bonecry's wound should be re-opened.
On Swallow's rampage she could kill Oakwood if you want, Hexxi :3 He's just an elder, after all, so her ebil-ness would glow!
Sapph, seeing as Pepperthorn is like a traitor and all, it might enhance her evil nature if she killed an apprentice from her own clan (Ashpaw). What do you think?
And...somebody beat up Salt xD
'' ...oh, I won't go, oh, no no -♫ ||
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Post by Fishy on Jan 29, 2008 20:17:48 GMT 9
Zam, could Pepperthorn kill Nightpaw? 'Cause at the clan meeting, I was gonna have him announce what happened because he can't keep secrets very well.
If not...Any takers?
Also!
Anybody want to hurt Pebblepaw or Riverstone?
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Post by ♫ admin on Jan 29, 2008 21:41:09 GMT 9
|| ♫- there's only music so that there's new ringtones... ''OH awesome, yeah! Sorry I missed Nightpaw, I had too many things to keep track of (my mind is a hopeless, spacey, disorganized jumble xD) But yes, I think that'd work out quite well, especially because she already made the death threat!
'' ...oh, I won't go, oh, no no -♫ ||
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Post by Incognito on Jan 30, 2008 5:41:32 GMT 9
Okies! So Dark will attack Duskpaw. ^^ And Felicia'll runn around scratching cats... so I suppose there will be a few unplanned (small) injuries in the battle.
Sure, Pepperthorn can kill Ashpaw! Ashpaw: -Narrows eyes- ...I hate you. Sure ya do. But anyways. ^^ Yah, he'll just lie there for a while then... kick up the daisies.
And Garnetstorm could attack Riverstone! ^^
Thornfire (forgot to put this earlier) can get a very, very deep gouge across his front left leg, from his shoulder to elbow, anyone? And Mossfoot shall run around doing... vague harm.
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Post by Folf on Jan 30, 2008 10:13:25 GMT 9
Mkay, sounds good, Boe! :3
And Sapphire- perhaps Veiledeye's can get in a fight with Thornfire. He could also lend the part of breaking her leg, and she would give him the wound just before or after he breaks the leg? And on Duskpaw, Hexxi just proposed that Adderpaw will attack her after...well, not to sure if Hex wants the details given away. So, is it okay if the plan with Dark attacking is off?
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