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Post by Starpelt on Jun 14, 2008 20:44:33 GMT 9
Name: Starpelt Gender: Female Age: Books: Every single one exept outcast RP Sample: Starpelt looked around, not knowing what she was looking at or what she was thinking about. Perhaps she was thinking about how empty the fresh kill pile has been latley. Or maybe it was that Shadowclan had been very quiet latley. Or maybe it was that she hadnt found true love. Sure, all of them tom cats were in love with her, always bringing her freshkill and asking to train their apprentice with hers, but she didn't like any of them. Although she longed for kits of her own, she wasnt going to have them with some jerk of a cat.
She sensed something in the air. Starpelt new that scent anwhere. Shadowclan was attacking!! She jumped on the highrock. "Shadowclan is attacking!!" She screamed with all her might. Sure enough, Shadowclan came racing after her and the rest of her clan. What was going to happen now? Other: She is part of riverclan, very pretty, all of the toms love her, has not found true love yet
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Ash
Advanced Warrior
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Ashes to Ash; Dust to Dust[on:Teaching WOI about Trees][of:Saving the world from eco-terrorism]
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Post by Ash on Jun 19, 2008 1:51:55 GMT 9
Ashes to AshThat's a pretty good rp sample! =not in right place= But, before Boe gets in here, I know that I saw a lot of spelling mistakes in your second paragraph... =still not in right place= Sigh... =shuffles off= Dust to Dust
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