Post by Incognito on Feb 26, 2008 4:14:46 GMT 9
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Name: Brokenhope
Clan: JaggedClan
Gender: Tomcat
Status: Elder
Appearance:
Name: Brokenhope
Clan: JaggedClan
Gender: Tomcat
Status: Elder
Appearance:
Brokenhope is a once strong tom, who is still quite stocky, but less well-kept, he has only three legs, due to a fight with a rouge, in whick his leg had to be amputated. Brokenhope has one broad, bitter eye, and the only light the gathers in it is a glitter of unhappiness. His gaze is an ominous, wistful sea green, and the space where his other eye should be is an almost unnoticable white patch, with a few strands of fur drifting over it. His nose is a orange-pink colour, while his muzzle is white and speckled with ivory whiskers. His claws are white, like his yellow-tinged fangs, and can still do some damage.Personality:
Brokenhope's pelt is thick, and gives the impression of muscular limbs, when they are, in fact, more like a kittypets. His pelt is mostly light grey, but it is tinged with a coppery-russet hue. His paws are a sleek brown, and his tail is ringed with a chocolate shade. His chest is patched with a small smoke-white splotch.
Brokenhope has no faith anymore, not even in StarClan, but the closest he can come to trust is his siblings, Sleetstorm and Hazelgaze. He is a complete pessimist, and looks at the world with cold, bitter eyes. He wastes his days wishing, wishing that the day his life had changed had not happened. He sometimes listens to Hazelgaze telling stories, but the only smile this raises is an almost mocking one. The most active thing he does most of the time, is argue, he is easily agitated, and doesn't give up on an argument until he's won it.History:
SmokekitKin:
Brokenhope actually started out as Smokekit, he was born to Slatefrost, and her mate, Greystone. His two siblings were Sleetkit and Hazelkit. They often explored outside camp, and had happy, normal kithoods.
Smokepaw
Smokepaw was the apprentice of Greystone, his sister, Hazelpaw, of Slatefrost, and his brother, Sleetpaw of Thistledown. They trained hard and well, and, soon enough...
Smokepelt//Brokenhope
Smokepaw became Smokepelt, Sleetpaw became Sleetstorm, and Hazelpaw became Hazelgaze.
Then, one frail leaf-bare, his parents and Thistledown went out on border patrol. They never returned, and were assumed dead. He mourned more than Sleetstorm and Hazelgaze, and almost turned to living death, and just as he was recovering...
He was due to join the elders soon, and he went on hunting patrol with his siblings. They came across a rouge, and fought, the rouge managed to knock out Hazelgaze and Sleetstorm. By the end, one of his eyes had been gouged out, and his leg almost hanging off.
An apprentice found them, and got some warriors to bring them back. His leg had to be amputated, and he was renamed Brokenhope, for his personality completely changed. And then, the siblings were moved to the elders.
Slatefrost and Greystone -- Parents, deceased.Other:
Brokenhope and Sleetstorm -- Siblings. (Sleetstorm may be played by anyone.)
I shall start roleplaying him in ages, just wanted to make him.[/blockquote]